Immunisation programs can prevent common childhood illnesses. Should immunisation of children be compulsory or should parents have the right to reject such programs?

A currently contentious issue relates to whether

vaccination

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programs

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should be mandatory so that youngsters will not suffer from sicknesses or whether parents should be free to choose if they get their

children

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immunized. In

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essay, I am going to explain why immunization has to be compulsory.

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of all, most parents are not engaged in jobs in

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fields.

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means that they cannot make proper decisions concerning people’s health.

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, there was a child killed by a terminal disease in Japan. The doctors who treated her suggested that she be vaccinated to recuperate from the sickness, but her father, who was not a medical practitioner, turned down the suggestion, leading to the death of the child. He firmly believed that if she received the vaccine, she would pass away.

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, medical authorities claimed the completely opposite thing. With proper

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, she would still be alive.

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, immunization

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greatly contribute to the development of nations. In fact,

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programs

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are said to be a driving force behind the economic advancement of developed countries.

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is because

vaccination

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reduces the number of

children

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dying before they become five years old, providing countries with sufficient

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forces.

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, It is said that If

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became more common in African nations, where about 90 out of 1,000

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pass away by the time they are five years old, they would lift themselves out of poverty. To conclude, there seem to be more benefits than drawbacks to making immunization

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mandatory. Considering the preciousness of youngsters’ lives, there are no reasons governments should not make it illegal for parents to prevent

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from being vaccinated.

momonanaharunatusThu Jun 24 2021

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Immunisation programs can prevent common childhood illnesses. Should immunisation of children be compulsory or should parents have the right to reject such programs?

Your opinion

some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that his money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Most people today prefer to socialize online rather than spending time with their friends in local community. Do advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

Your child's school is going for a trip out of the country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group. Write a letter to school. In your letter, you should: •ask questions about the trip •tell them why you want to join the group •explain how you can help.