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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Remarkable improvements
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 speech recognition technologies in recent years appear to offer an easy way
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to learn a new
language
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, so society tends to use software
instead
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 of learning.
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, being multi-lingual is a better option than using the translator tools, and I will explain the reasons for my belief. The main reason would be a mistranslation, especially
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language
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 which has the
tone
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. For example, in Chinese, one for has more than five different meanings
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 the tone, so
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that
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be
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mix up the
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;
then
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it
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leads to misunderstanding each other.
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secondly
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, the underlying mechanism of the translator apps is
word to word
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. It means that cannot translate the slang and idioms used by people in daily life.
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, some words have different meanings depending on the situation, but
translation
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, it can cause misunderstanding and confusion.
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, using the
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 software is effortless, low-priced, and pocket-friendly; they fail to provide the word's true meaning.
In addition
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, learning a new
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 by oneself gives massive benefits for individuals like improving cognitive thinking and digging
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 different cultures.
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, the limitation of the current
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 different occasions and cannot provide the true meaning of the idioms.
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, it seems that learning a new
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