Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
for
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maintain
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children physical as well as mental health sports play important role in their life. Because outdoor recreation is nothing but , the part of
exercise
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.
Equally
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it is beneficial for
community
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the community
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. But, some people claim that
,
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it is no more than free time activity. In my opinion, I think, playing games
that
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increases a student strength and
proud
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pride
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of
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in
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their
society
.
To begin
with,
sport
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sports
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play as helpful or leisure is depend upon people thinking some play
sport
in their free time for
stress free
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stress-free
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feelings
moreover
, some students are passionate about their
sport
.
For instance
, in
India
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everyone
play
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plays
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a
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cricket because they are interested and play as
a
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entertainment.
Although
, they make
team
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a team
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and play
as
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on
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their personal level. And not focused
about
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on
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world
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the world
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cup etc.
Secondly
, take part in outdoor games is beneficial for
teenager
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teenagers
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health. It helps to grow children as much as fast.
Moreover
, they should improve their body muscles,
stress free
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stress-free
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mind
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minds
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as well as they are hungry to eat food.
For
example
, in covid-19 lockdown students are not allowed to go outside for playing with their friends that’s the reason they are angry and irritated
also
.
Thirdly
,
student
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students
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play
sport
is
proud
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a proud
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feel
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to feel
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for
society
, playing
sport
as a champion it gives some different kind of medals for
society
. Equally, it is
entertainment
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an entertainment
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part for nearby people.
For
example
, Mahendra
singh
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Singh
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Dhoni is
good
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example
because some children want to become like him. And he got
trophy
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a trophy
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towards our nation.
For
example
, Sania Mirza
she
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is famous for Tennis
sport
. She is serious about her
sport
. And it is beneficial for both
nation
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nations
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as well as herself. She got six grand slam
title
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titles
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. So, it is
proud
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a proud
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for
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of
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society
.
Lastly
, I conclude that
,
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playing
sport
as a passion is helpful
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for
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foe
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for
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society
and personal development. So,
sport
is important and leisure is
depend
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dependent
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on human thinking.
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