Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
for
Change preposition
to
maintain
children physical as well as mental health sports play important role in their life. Because outdoor recreation is nothing but , the part of Add a comma
,maintain
exercise
. Add an article
the exercise
Equally
it is beneficial for Add a comma
,Equally
community
. But, some people claim thatAdd an article
the community
,
it is no more than free time activity. In my opinion, I think, playing games Remove the comma
apply
that
increases a student strength and Correct pronoun usage
apply
proud
Replace the word
pride
of
their Change preposition
in
society
.
To begin
with, sport
play as helpful or leisure is depend upon people thinking some play Change the noun form
sports
sport
in their free time for stress free
feelings Add a hyphen
stress-free
moreover
, some students are passionate about their sport
. For instance
, in India
everyone Add a comma
,India
play
Change the verb form
plays
a
cricket because they are interested and play as Remove the article
apply
a
entertainment. Remove the article
apply
Although
, they make team
and play Correct article usage
a team
as
their personal level. And not focused Change preposition
on
about
Change preposition
on
world
cup etc.
Correct article usage
the world
Secondly
, take part in outdoor games is beneficial for teenager
health. It helps to grow children as much as fast. Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
Moreover
, they should improve their body muscles, stress free
Add a hyphen
stress-free
mind
as well as they are hungry to eat food. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
For
example
, in covid-19 lockdown students are not allowed to go outside for playing with their friends that’s the reason they are angry and irritated also
.
Thirdly
, student
play Fix the agreement mistake
students
sport
is proud
Correct article usage
a proud
feel
for Add the particle
to feel
society
, playing sport
as a champion it gives some different kind of medals for society
. Equally, it is entertainment
part for nearby people. Correct article usage
an entertainment
For
example
, Mahendra singh
Dhoni is Change the capitalization
Singh
good
Change the article
a good
example
because some children want to become like him. And he got trophy
towards our nation.
Correct article usage
a trophy
For
example
, Sania Mirza she
is famous for Tennis Correct pronoun usage
apply
sport
. She is serious about her sport
. And it is beneficial for both nation
as well as herself. She got six grand slam Fix the agreement mistake
nations
title
. So, it is Fix the agreement mistake
titles
proud
Correct article usage
a proud
for
Change preposition
of
society
.
Lastly
, I conclude that,
playing Remove the comma
apply
sport
as a passion is helpful Correct your spelling
for
foe
Correct your spelling
for
society
and personal development. So, sport
is important and leisure is depend
on human thinking.Replace the word
dependent
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