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Countries should produce the food that their population eat, and import as little as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Since the beginning of time agriculture is what make it possible for humans to thrive and evolve. Currently, every nation grows some of their basic needs and buy from other places the rest.
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, there are some individuals who believe that each country should produce their own
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 in almost totality. I tend to disagree with that statement because it is either impossible or economically silly.
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, some types of crops only grow in specific environments, which would be expensive to replicate.
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, some kinds of
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 only thrive in cold weather while others need a warm climate and water.
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,
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 that have extreme weather would have to build controlled environments to achieve
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.
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, the prices would rise substantially because replicate different climates is too expensive.
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, even in
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 with regular
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 is impossible.
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 is because the country would have to build farms where there are houses or technology companies now. Take Japan as an example.
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 nation lacks land and to be able to grow most of their
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 they would have to destroy their technology factories to give space for crops.
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, there is not enough land to be sustainable in the long term. In conclusion, I totally disagree that all nations should stop import
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.
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 is because in places where it is possible the prices would rise exponentially and in other
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 is impracticable.
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,
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 would make our world retrocede in time as most
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 would be worried about agriculture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-sufficiency
  • trade dependency
  • food security
  • sustainable agriculture
  • local economies
  • carbon footprint
  • supply chain
  • food miles
  • agricultural sector
  • domestic production
  • import substitution
  • food sovereignty
  • global supply chains
  • trade imbalances
  • food standards
  • economic resilience
  • biodiversity
  • cultural heritage
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