Some people say that school studies are not useful and most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples.

Many people claim that

school

is not necessary for pupils and parents said that they spend their time as well as talking with a classmate while others think that

school

can give good communication and some confidence. Personally, I do not agree with

this

statement that

school

is not useful and I will try to defend my point of view. Due to the

school

, pressure pupils will be discipline as well as excellent communication with the people.

However

, they

also

can learn something new and take knowledge from

teacher

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.

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, the

theacher

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teacher

always conducts the topic and even if you do not want to listen you will hear something new or read anyway. For these reasons we can judge and give our thoughts, in my

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I totally agree and confident in studying and secondary

school

.

On the other hand

, money can stop apply people to study and think that they can do some business or find a good job without a diploma and knowledge.

In other words

, I mean that they

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a small percentage to find a good job and create a successful business.

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,

i

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have a friend his name is Billy and he left his

school

when he was

at

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9th grade and

then

he starts to work for a small amount of money and 7 hours a day and achieved nothing.

This

fact killed the desire to work without a diploma In conclusion,

i

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strongly recommend applying to study and learning

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as well as you can .