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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. unfair. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

#sports #professionals #money #people #professions
Unfair distribution of wealth among members of different
professions
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cause
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 of huge debate over the years.
The
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modern day
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 entertainers
such
actors
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,
sport
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professionals
 and similar
people
 have always been wrongfully described as
money
 merchants who were apparently earning unfair amounts of
money
 in comparison with
people
 in other important
professions
such
 as firefighters, doctors and teachers. Taking a closer look into the aforementioned debate, it is obvious that there are economic, social and financial factors that
justifies
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 the amount of
money
 earned by
sports
professionals
.
To begin
 with, it is true that
people
 in important
professions
such
 as firefighters, doctors and kindergarten workers earn a mere amount of what
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 footballer earns. The supporters of the debate who think that
sports
professionals
 should earn less than
people
 in those
professions
 justify their sentiment by the fact that
people
 working in vital areas
that
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 supporting our daily lives are risking their lives to help us while sport
professionals
 are just entertainers without whom, the life can normally continue.
On the other hand
, the amount of
money
 earned by the
sports
professionals
are
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 earned via their input through sponsorship deals, marketing programs, revenues that they help to generate. The great deal of
money
 that they generate cannot be matched by
people
 working in other
professions
 and
therefore
, their worth in terms of making
money
 is rightly reflected in their salaries. Even though
such
predicament
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 may seem unfair, the salary levels of both categories are ruled by economic laws and merits. In conclusion, I believe that successful
sports
professionals
 have a right to earn
greater
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 deal of
money
 than
people
 in other important
professions
 as in
in
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financial terms, their financial input is greater than the group of
people
 in the latter category.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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