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Students today get information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#students #information #libraries
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It is sometimes argued that
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 about the role of the
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 moment because
students
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 get their study materials from online. While I disagree with the idea of stoping
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education
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System
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. There are several reasons why the
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 of all, traditionally
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 is a great source of knowledge because the
library
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 is the only place where all types of
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 sorted by categories. Generally, In every
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 sources, especially they consist old and new
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types of
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. Almost all educational institutes
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 a central
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 do their research by different kinds of
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,and
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 did their group study on there. They prefer the
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 because many writers book available
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there.So the
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 is very essential for
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 built a
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 for common
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. Children to adults all types of
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. it is really beneficial for normal
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, some
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a permanent employees
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On the other hand
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, nowadays the
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system
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. All kinds of resources and theory available on the
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, when any
students
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. Pupils can get
a free pdf versions
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 of any book on the
internet
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. It is true that
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 the
internet
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 is very helpful for
students
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. But most of them do not use it properly.Sometimes, School going
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 play games or videos on devices. Which is not good. So paper-based
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 always safe for them. The
library
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 is a key part of the
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system
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That is
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 we can not think about our
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library
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. In conclusion, the
internet
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 is important for
students
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 at the same time
library
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.I believe without
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students
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. So it is necessary.
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