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Success in formal "pen and paper" examinations is often seen to be a sign of intelligence. To what extent do you agree with the view that formal examination measure intelligence?

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In the past, "pen and paper" examinations was popular with people and believed that it could be a sign of
intelligence
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, as
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,
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 could be estimated through it. In my point of view, I do not
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 opinion for some reasons.
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 with, people have their own cleverness,
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, there are many kinds of
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 in the world. According to Howard
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Gardner's
 theory of multiple
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, nine kinds of
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 are expressed through
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the characteristics
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 of humans. In fact, people who have a sense of music and the ability to play instruments are accessed to have musical
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 and not measured by formal examinations.
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, multiple intelligences are showed in different fields, so that ,
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 could be estimated in a variety of ways.
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, children in the modern world are growing up absolutely including
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 in numerous aspects of life, which proves to be not measured by formal tests. On the one hand, a test is not good enough to meet some criteria
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 as quality and supervisory process. In fact, some formal ones cover a range of consistent knowledge so that students might study by rote learning and these examinees are not taken for grant to be intelligent.
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, the National High School Exam for literature has the scope of knowledge for practice ỏ no change in form so that it could be easy to predict or learn by heart.
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, the process of supervision of ẽam might be loose
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 no hard for students to cheat. In reality, there is an increase
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the rate of cheating among pupils
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 as using the telephone or holding back documents in the exam room. To conclude, now exam in the paper is unpopular in many countries because of its quality and process, in lieu of other methods to examine
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.
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 should be measured by another ultimately way precisely
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