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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued issue whether
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written
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oral
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 a new job while the employer chooses the
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 based on the one on one conversation between employer and
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 people cannot read about any instruction in
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 format while the way of speaking style is helping most.
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, in
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communication
 dies little by little we can see that clearly
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their's
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feelings
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 and emotions through only speaking due to they can convey easily without any mistakes.
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 Embassy interview it's based on
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 a written interview method.
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, the oral way of
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 always
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 and most
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 to all the population. To conclude, certainly, the spoken
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 is the most significant than written. I strongly agree with
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication
  • powerful
  • feedback
  • clarification
  • dynamic
  • engaging
  • non-verbal
  • cues
  • tone
  • facial expressions
  • body language
  • relationships
  • connection
  • emotional
  • expression
  • faster
  • decisions
  • discussions
  • cultures
  • leadership
  • confidence
  • messages
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