Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?
In
this
materialistic world, money is considered the most important aspect of life
. Everyone is running here and there to make more and more wealth and people are busy with their ambitious life
. Today, they have less time
for themselves and their families as their primary inspiration is getting richer every day. However
, in my opinion, it is necessary to have more time
for own self than to have more money. Analysing the fact that money can't
buy happiness, health and exhausting yourself in being one
making machine that can drive you away from your family will prove it.
First
of all, your health and happiness is the basic need of your life
, no matter, how old you are, they remain will be the pillar of self-satisfaction. For example
, we see a lot of poor people around us that seems to be happiest and a lot of very rich and powerful individuals look tired, unhappy and exhausted. This
happiness, we see on faces is because of the strong support and relationships they have around them. Moreover
, rich folks usually spend much of their lives staying busy with work and couldn't
build strong friendships to enjoy.
Secondly
, during working long hours they forget their health and fitness issues and when they get what they want, they mostly don't
have enough energy to enjoy the benefits. For instance
, one
recent report in a local magazine shows that wealthy mates likely die 5 years younger than their average counterparts. Since they largely keep lives confined to their jobs, they don't
even do leisure activities like exercise to stay fit. That shows how important it is to make time
for yourself
In conclusion, free and happy time
is essential for a beautiful and prosperous life
. One
should be ambitious in life
yet one
should not waste his or her life
in the workplace. Everyone should spend a major part in building strong relations and enjoying life
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