Some people think that radio has become out-of-date and there is no need to listen to the radio for the entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree?
Playing the
radio
was an entertaining and educational activity to broaden one's ideas with respect to music and improve the knowledge about the
recent events.But, as I made Correct article usage
apply
this
statement what is vital is the past tense used.This
means I disagree considering the radio
to be important nowadays.
Although
we feel that we should not walk away from what has been taught to us by our elders, I feel walking with the time and learning what the new era has to teach us is equally important.So here I feel listening to the radio
is now a bit outdated. There are various other ways to gather the news and enjoy the entartainment
in the worldCorrect your spelling
entertainment
Add the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
watching the TV, listening to a voice automated hearing device which is internet enabled and needs no hand fuction
or even reading the news on a phone or a tablet.In any of the above Correct your spelling
function
devices
we not only enjoy the entertainment without manually scrolling much avoiding the advertisements and even can browse through the sections without reading them in detail, especially the ones where we don't want to know in detail about.
Add a comma
,devices
On the other hand
, listening to the radio
has been a soothing way
of enjoying music and the most stereotypical way
to learn about what's happening in the world for many, like our parents and grandparents. From 1950 to 1980, especially in India
there were no televisions or cellphones or any other Add a comma
,India
way
except for a newspaper to know the about the daily and worldwide news headings. During those times, life was hard and yes, the radio
was a wonder
discovery. There would the birds chirping and the Replace the word
wonderful
radio
paying simultaneously from the neighborhood
kitchen's as the stay-at-home mother would make breakfast for her family as it was a trend for women in India to Change the spelling
neighbourhood
reamin
as housewives. Correct your spelling
remain
That
time their only source of entertainment was listening to Change preposition
At that
radio
and humming the music. Add an article
the radio
This
would bring a smile to their faces and make them do their daily chores in a cheerful way
. The radio
would also
help the roadside vendors and tea stalls engrossed in their work,
but in a healthy and jovial manner.
To conclude, I would say that as a person born after the advent of the television, watching my mother and father listen to Remove the comma
apply
radio
and me getting annoyed at its shrill noise at times to the point in my life where I could afford a walkman, later an iPod, a laptop and now I have a television with a fire stick device which is voice automated, I feel that the interest in listening to the Correct article usage
the radio
radio
is fading off. Walking with the times is as equally important as holding on to your past.But, I do prefer the former.Submitted by shishduble on
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