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Nowadays, parents give their children more freedom than parents did in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Recently,
children
 are given more
freedom
 by their caretakers more than ever.
Although
 there are some drawbacks of
this
 trend, I would argue that there are far more benefits. The main drawback of giving
children
freedom
 is that it might
result
 in altering their attitude and
behavior
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 the worse.
This
 is because since
children
 are exposed to various life situations
such
 as going to school, they are potentially subjected to harmful effects from their surroundings, in case of no parental intervention.
For example
, several
children
 might be affected by their peer pressure. With that in mind, if
parents
 did not prevent their offspring from dealing with
this
 bad companionship early,
this
 may
result
 in
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 in their personality
such
 as being disrespectful to others. Having said that, giving
children
freedom
 is most likely enhancing their mentality.
This
 based on the fact that
children
 must be prepared for making pivotal decisions in their future life;
Thus
, if
parents
 raise their
children
 on making
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 by giving them
freedom
 of making choices,
children
 will start to develop
sense
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 of autonomy.
For instance
, nowadays, many
parents
 gave their offspring monthly limited amount of money to cover their expenses as they hold them responsible in case of spending all
this
 money shortly;
therefore
, before purchasing anything, they have to reconsider their choice thoroughly to determine whether it worth the expenditure or not.
As a
result
, they are likely to handle their financial needs successfully in the future,
Conversely
, if they relied on their
parents
 to give them money whenever they
need
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, they will probably fail in their lives
years
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 to come, resulting in severe situations
such
 as bankruptcy.
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ways
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 of conclusion, despite giving
children
freedom
 might
result
 in consequences
such
 as negative influence from
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 environment, I consider it to be a positive development after all as it consolidates their sense of independence.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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