Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the broken

radio

Use synonyms

which has been repaired since

last

Linking Words

week. I hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you well. Two weeks ago I bought a

radio

Use synonyms

from the Grant Ave. branch of your shop. I noticed it was not working appropriately when I got home,

hence

Linking Words

, I took it back to the store and on-site staff told me they would repair it for me. Unfortunately, one week passed and I have not heard them back, so, it would be great if you could provide me with a feasible reason for the delay.

In addition

Linking Words

, they gave me a number to follow up on the process from the company's website,

however

Linking Words

, there is no update regarding my issue. I believe that

while

Linking Words

the problem was caused by your side, and

due to

Linking Words

the valid guarantee of the

radio

Use synonyms

, it would be

graceful

Correct your spelling

grateful

show examples

for your brand reputation if you provide me promptly with my repaired

radio

Use synonyms

or a brand-new one. I hope you will consider my request favourably. Yours faithfully Ali A

aliFri Feb 16 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and that supporting sentences are directly relevant to the main idea.

coherence cohesion

Try to use a wider range of cohesive devices (linking words) to guide the reader through your points more smoothly.

task achievement

Include specific details about the radio (model, purchase date) and describe the malfunction more specifically to strengthen your task response.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and suitably formal or polite tone throughout. Avoid informal expressions or slang.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

malfunctioning
inconvenience
promptly
compensation
customer satisfaction
reliable
favorable resolution
essential
retail business
well-known chain
swift resolution
personal use
disappointment
frustration
inquiry

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days some humans believe that history is the most vital subject in school, whereas others guess that subjects like science and technology are more necessary . This essay is going to look at both sides and conclude that science and technology are more essential than history.
6.5
band
scientits and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists? to what extent do you agree?
A debate surrounding whether scientists and technology experts should be prioritized over musicians and artists has become a topic for years. While it is true that science and technology bring a lot of positive influences on the whole society, there is undeniable that people whose jobs are related to arts play an important role in personal mental health and spiritual development.
7
band
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the 24/7 world, environmental degradation is the most likely cause of the planet's destruction. A group of scientists question whether there are threats more critical than the loss of living things in nature or not. This essay disputes both sides of the coin.
7
band
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?
The availability of online newspapers and books is attracting people in various ways; mostly because free of cost. I completely agree with the statement, that the day is not far when no one will buy printed newspapers and books.
7.5
band
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays a telephone has become the main equipment that people use all the time. Some people think that children spend most of their time on their mobile phones because this gadget has many tools for what students want. In my opinion, this trend could be both positive and negative in equal measure.

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

scientits and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists? to what extent do you agree?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?