Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a postive part of lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

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Advertising-these days are part of our modern society. We are surrounded by advertising campaigns whether it is an
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on a billboard, in a shopping centre or an
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that pops up
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while we watch a Youtube video. Advertising-these days are everywhere. Some believe advertising is a positive development, while others feel that it has a
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of negative drawbacks. In
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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion about advertising. Certainly, advertising does have a positive role in our daily lives as it informs us about products or services which we may need. If we are struggling to get a tough stain out of a shirt,
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, and we see an
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about a
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that is on the market that guarantees the removal of any tough stains
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it would be useful for us to buy the
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.
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, if it wasn'
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for the
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we wouldn'
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have been aware of the
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, advertising
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creates a
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of job opportunities, from the company that manufactures the
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to the person who markets it and the retailer who sells it. Creating job opportunities
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boost the economy is becoming stronger. Despite
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, some see advertising as a negative development because it may create a want in people to buy products or services which they don'
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really need or can'
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afford. When one sees a
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or service which you can'
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afford it might lead a person to go into debt by borrowing money from their bank, friends or relatives. It can
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have a long-lasting knock-on effect as they may struggle to get get out of debt. Another negative development is that a
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of advertisements are aimed at children. Children might see an
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about a toy,
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, and will ask their parents to get them the toy. Whereas the parents might not be able to afford it leading to a
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of tension in the household. In my view,
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adverting does have its drawbacks, by creating a want for a
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which one don'
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necessarily need. It does have some very positive aspects
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as creating job opportunities for a
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of people. In conclusion, advertising is here to stay especially in our modern society.
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, certain advertisements should be controlled especially those aimed at children. It is necessary to keep society informed about what products and services are available.
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