Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Digital
technology
, like online libraries
or search engine
, provides a better user experience than public Fix the agreement mistake
engines
libraries
, which means there is no need to spend time
and budget on traditional libraries
. Actually, I still believe that maintain public libraries
is necessary for whole
society and they should not be replaced by digital Add an article
the whole
technology
.
Beyond all question
, digital Fix the agreement mistake
questions
technology
has numerous benefits that public libraries
can not give to users. Firstly
, It is convenient. There is a common issue that people’s time
is wasted on traffic and find the book they want when they arrived libraries
. Compare with that, users only need Change preposition
at libraries
tap
few letters into Fix the infinitive
to tap
search
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a search
the search
engine
, the Fix the agreement mistake
engines
books
they need will pop on the screen of their Correct your spelling
smartphone
smart phone
,and they can do it Correct your spelling
smartphone
in
anywhere they want . Change preposition
apply
Which
means the Correct pronoun usage
This
time
that spend
on traffic and searching can Change the verb form
spends
saved
to do other things; Change the verb form
save
be saved
Secondly
, people have more choices when they using digital technology
. More and more writers are more likely to published
their new Change the form of the verb
publish
books
on the internet rather than a printing
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a printing book
printing books
books
due to costs . At same
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the same
time
, because public libraries
usually operate freely, they might lack of
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fund
to update the Fix the agreement mistake
funds
books
in libraries
. So that, people can Correct your spelling
find
fine
more Correct your spelling
find
books
on the internet.
However
, even public libraries
have many drawbacks, they still have their own benefits that digital technology
can not give. Some precious manuscripts and materials only exist in public libraries
, because these stuff
is too old , Change the determiner
this stuff
scan
machine can not recognize the words to make a digital edition. Correct article usage
the scan
Also
,public libraries
provide a place can store and preserve these works and give students a chance to learn. For example
, the diary of Yuan LongPing , who is a
greatest scientist , stored in public Change the article
the
libraries
WuHan
university. It Correct your spelling
Wuhan
be
conserved in a safe place and many local Change the verb form
is
student
can quote the material in Change to a plural noun
students
this
dairy to finish their paper.
In conclusion,even digital technology
is more convenient than traditional libraries
,but public libraries
have important
function in Add an article
an important
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the academy
academy
. So that, Fix the agreement mistake
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think digital Change the capitalization
I
technology
is not replaced public libraries
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite