Nowadays more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face, is this a positive or negative development?
Many
people
nowadays prefer to socialize through social media Use synonyms
instead
of meeting them in person. Linking Words
People
are avoiding going out and meeting their friends and family, confining themselves in a room, and using online platforms to communicate, which leads to isolating themselves, distant relations with close ones, and developing mental illnesses. For these reasons, Use synonyms
People
choosing online to socialize is a negative development.
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Firstly
, when Linking Words
people
choose to socialize through online platforms, they spend more Use synonyms
time
in their rooms, which could result in isolating themselves from society. when the person is completely isolated, Use synonyms
this
could lead to mental Linking Words
illness
and depression. Use synonyms
Also
, not only mental Linking Words
illness
but Use synonyms
also
spending more Linking Words
time
online could cause numerous health problems, Use synonyms
such
as obesity, high blood pressure, and joint problems due to sitting in the same position for hours and not having enough movements. Linking Words
Thus
, Linking Words
people
preferring online communications could result in physical and mental Use synonyms
illness
.
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Secondly
, there are Linking Words
people
on social media who create fake identities, Impersonate other persons, or show fake personalities. Many Use synonyms
people
could easily be impressed by these online Use synonyms
imposters
, who could later harm and attack them, especially teenagers who are impressionable are the victims of these Use synonyms
imposters
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In addition
, there are numerous frauds and Linking Words
scammers
online. As many Use synonyms
people
are spending their Use synonyms
time
online, they could fall into trap of these Use synonyms
scammers
. There are many cases where Use synonyms
people
have lost a huge amount of money to online fraud. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
people
could easily fall into trap of online Use synonyms
imposters
and Use synonyms
scammers
as they spend more Use synonyms
time
online.
To conclude, it is a negative development because choosing online platforms to socialize has many disadvantages, Use synonyms
Such
as it could cause physical and mental Linking Words
illness
, and Use synonyms
people
could easily fall into trap of online Use synonyms
scammers
and Use synonyms
imposters
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