Population explosion' is a concern for a few nations. Some countries formulated a one-child policy, and others are contemplating the same. Is it a right thing for a country to interfere in restricting population? Discuss.

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The growing
population
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is considered the most significant and critical threat to the environment. While some countries have imposed laws on childbirth, others are opposing it.
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essay will discuss both sides of the arguments in depth;
however
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, in my opinion, it is the root cause of poverty, depletion of resources, and
environment
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pollution,
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,
population
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restrictions are required among overpopulated countries like India, and China among others. Many countries are emphasizing the awareness of
population
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control. They have implemented a one-child policy to control the size of its national
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.
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, China has started awarding families with an extra reward if they only had a child.
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, India has
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begun to impose laws state-wise; recently, Uttar Pradesh chief minister has announced that families with more than two children will lose jobs in government sectors. The human
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is the cause of the exploitation of natural resources; with the enhanced number of drivers on the road, impacting the environment and leading to climate change.
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measures are essential to stop
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growing community.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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