In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourage the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Whether live
sports
on television change youngsters from actually playing sports
in real life is a controversial issue. In my opinion, TV
sports
live strongly encourage young people
join
Add the particle
to join
sports
. This
essay will discuss the benefits of media and the effects from
famous athletes.
Beyond all question, Change preposition
of
TV
sports
live has some benefits for young people
and the most important one is that provide a chance for them to have an access of sports
which they never experience before . Many sports
channels broadcast non-stop sporting competitions and young people
are more likely to try
play outdoor games when they Add the particle
totry
are interest
in Change the verb form
are interested
a
certain Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
sports
that are played on TV
. Because youngests
will lack Correct your spelling
youngest
of
Remove the preposition
apply
interests
Fix the agreement mistake
interest
on
Change preposition
in
sports
if they do not understand how these games actually play. For example
，the number of baseball players in Guiyang increased from 500 to 1670 people
during these 2 years. Compare with teenagers in 2010，them become a big fan of baseball due to the new sports
lives on TV
. So that，Non-stop sports
on TV
in a way encourage youngsters from becoming sportsmen themselves.
In
addition
，Add a comma
, addition
sport
stars may become a brand new reason that young Change the noun form
sports
people
play sports
in
Change preposition
apply
outside
area. They might be attracted by Add an article
the outside
an outside
sports
celebrities’ fantastic life, excellent capacity or something else. So that，they might set these famous athletes as Add an article
a goal
the goal
goal
to achieve and do Fix the agreement mistake
goals
sports
oftenly
to become Correct your spelling
often
a good athletes
as their Correct the article-noun agreement
a good athlete
good athletes
idol
. Fix the agreement mistake
idols
For instance
，Jordan is the idol of a little boy and his dream is become
a famous basketball player Fix the infinitive
to become
as
Jordan. Change preposition
like
Finally
，this
little boy join
the NBA and is Change the verb form
joins
know
as Black Mamba. His name is Kobe，the famous Change the form of the verb
known
basktball
player in the hall of fame. Correct your spelling
basketball
This
example emphasize
the importance of the force of a role model for young Change the verb form
emphasizes
people
.
To conclude, Sport lives on TV
provide a channel for young people
know
more about Fix the infinitive
to know
sports
and these sport
stars become a motivation for young Change the noun form
sports
people
to do sports
. I strongly believe that it encourage
young Change the verb form
encourages
people
to do sports
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