Task 2 : Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Exorbitant cost to a knowledge of the universe with an area of space for most people is unacceptable. They believe that

this

money can be spent on better work,

such

as helping to alleviate poverty weather. It somewhat disagrees with

this

idea.

Firstly

, population increase weather changes, and humans, during the process, are destroying the planet. space travel is not a luxury;

instead

, it is essential to save the earth.

In other words

, the world’s population is growing, and the plant is small for

this

size of the population; so to preserve civilization and the land, we have to go into the cosmos. We are destroying the ground, so by going into space ew can help save

this

planet. I do not mean to leave the earth altogether, but we can move the industry into the cosmos to protect the land from the destructive effects of climate change.

For instance

, we could mention Ice Age in the Dinosaur Age.

On the other hand

, more people are against the way we spend cash going into the galaxy; well, they think we can devote

This

capital to reducing poverty in underdeveloped countries. Many people can not even provide for their basic needs or spend

This

cash on improving the climate.

Furthermore

, going into a galaxy may endanger human lives,

for example

, live on Mars.

As a result

, it is true that we can spend

This

capital to alleviate poverty and improve the weather. Still, for the advancement of science and our concert to destroy the land, we must pay the price for it, and the price is nothing but spending more money.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

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space exploration
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earthly concerns
telecommunications
environmental conservation
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diplomatic relationships
peaceful cooperation
long-term survival
colonization
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Task 2 : Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many schools these days have problems with poor student behaviour. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems?

A number of people are moving from rural area to city’s. Is this a positive or a negative development?

“How plastic bottles are recycled?” The recycling of plastic bottles is a comprehensive process that turns discarded materials into new, usable products.

It is important for people to take risks, both in professional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?