IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6

some people prefer to buy local products while others product international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #products #product
These days we generally used a lot of things in which some of them are local products while others are international ones. Sometimes it depends upon the quality and availability of a
product
, if the
product
 is good inbuiltbuilding the buying a local
product
 is not a bad choice. Sometimes we experience bad with international brands
also
 and they are expensive too. Every country and government try to convince the public to
use
 their own homemade things and avoid buying a cheap
product
 like made in china. Suppose if we only shop for local products for our daily routine need
then
 we support our government economically
also
 which mean GDP od country gets strong every year. The benefits of homemade products are that the availability of things is always for people and quality is not compromised. While the other opine is quite different they believe that if we purchase something expensive and branded them the life and
use
 of the
product
 is
also
 much better
then
 local one's, so a higher ,price if we buy it
then
 there is no need to but them again and again, if we want to know Which one is best in the market
then
 we should try both once. Money is not a priority for them they believe in the quality and easy
use
 of the
product
. In conclusion, we can say that the choice of
product
use
 is different for everyone. the society we belong to a different class, so it is obvious that their choices are
also
 different.
Submitted by naresh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: