Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with?

Some people consider that every
school
has to be more encouraging and exciting for
students
to learn. Others feel that
school
should be the place to educate
students
. In
this
essay, I will explain the reasons whether or not I agree with the statement.
To begin
with, it is up to the hands of admins and teachers to keep the
students
encouraged and motivated to proceed. In order not to lose attention from their
students
, they must take some steps to make the learning easier to catch on. Teachers can make their learning lectures a little bit
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rhythmic and amusing.
As a result
,
students
will find their given subjects more pleasant to adapt
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For example
, elementary sections of
students
can do their learning by singing or dancing.
This
ensures the
students
’ capabilities to catch on
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knowledge.
Moreover
, the relationship between
students
and their tutor can be seen to be healthy.
Hence
, they can be friendly by helping out each other.
For example
,
students
do not feel hesitated taking help from their beloved teachers.
Although
this
way of teaching can make the
students
’ work lighter as air, some may find it to be disturbing to be taught. In case of having
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excitement in studying, some tutors think it is not the best strategy of promoting pupils to higher classes or positions.
Consequently
, the basic knowledge will not be attained. Every kind of blame goes to the admins and principles
in particular
.
Hence
, the
schools
will be in trouble to confront the blame in public. Another concern is exam pressure. If there is no
such
thing as “fun”, every child will reckon the
school
to be strict and boring.
Therefore
schools
will lose bright
students
if
schools
do not provide
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or traditional programs. Even if
schools
provide restrictions on the education systems, the pupils might lose interest to study
further
. Certainly, worse outcomes can occur. To conclude, I think
schools
should provide some cultural functions, sports or special events. So that every child feels the connection that they belong to a
school
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full of encouragement and amusement.
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