It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg.dinosour,dodo,..). There are no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TThe

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the

natural world has been witnessing the disappearance of some creatures

that

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regarded as a natural election. Some scientists argue that whether to inhibit the

extinction

of wild animals or not. In my opinion, I do agree that communities should have protective actions for creatures and their places for

wildlifes

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wildlife

in an ecosystem because of the following reasons.

Firstly

, the

extinction

rate

today or the modern

extinction

is not based on natural law.

This

rate

is estimated significantly higher than the expected

rate

. The increased

rate

does not allow for ecosystems to recover or other

species

to occupy vacant niches. A good example of

this

in New Zealand is the kereru. Kereru is the only bird to be able to swallow seeds of native trees and disperse them. The

extinction

of

this

may result in the loss of many native trees.

Due to an

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unprecedented event

such

as a large-scale fire, could cause

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terrible status. Particularly,

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population size of some

species

could be vulnerable to

extinction

.

Secondly

, the main reason

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modern

extinction

is human impact as opposed to natural phenomena. Human activities for commercial purposes included over-exploitation, water pollution, climate change cause the loss of habitats and the development of

species

.

For instance

, the zoo is the limited habitat for animal

species

that have

becoming

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gradually less wild than others living in the forest.

Therefore

, creatures should not be under the threat of

extinction

because people are provided with many indispensable services including clean air, water, food and medical sources, commercial, aesthetic and recreational benefits coming from the natural world. In conclusion, it is undeniable that human life has been maintained by

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world so the preservation of endangered

species

should be more concerned. It is predicted that the

extinction

will come back to be a natural event and not be in relation to human activities.