It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg.dinosour,dodo,..). There are no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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natural world has been witnessing the disappearance of some creatures

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regarded as a natural election. Some scientists argue that whether to inhibit the

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of wild animals or not. In my opinion, I do agree that communities should have protective actions for creatures and their places for

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in an ecosystem because of the following reasons.

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, the

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today or the modern

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is not based on natural law.

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is estimated significantly higher than the expected

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. The increased

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does not allow for ecosystems to recover or other

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to occupy vacant niches. A good example of

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in New Zealand is the kereru. Kereru is the only bird to be able to swallow seeds of native trees and disperse them. The

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of

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may result in the loss of many native trees.

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unprecedented event

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as a large-scale fire, could cause

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terrible status. Particularly,

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population size of some

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could be vulnerable to

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, the main reason

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modern

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is human impact as opposed to natural phenomena. Human activities for commercial purposes included over-exploitation, water pollution, climate change cause the loss of habitats and the development of

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.

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, the zoo is the limited habitat for animal

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that have

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gradually less wild than others living in the forest.

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, creatures should not be under the threat of

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because people are provided with many indispensable services including clean air, water, food and medical sources, commercial, aesthetic and recreational benefits coming from the natural world. In conclusion, it is undeniable that human life has been maintained by

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world so the preservation of endangered

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should be more concerned. It is predicted that the

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will come back to be a natural event and not be in relation to human activities.