With the advancement of technologies,
tend to spend more time with devices. Some people think
should do more learnings in arts and
subjects at school. I strongly believe
is a good idea and will elucidate the reasons why they should be encouraged to follow it.
plays an indispensable role in improving the mental conditions of people. Due to the present education system, it is incontrovertible that
spend more time on
compared to the past, so that
has caused mental related problems for some teens. It has proven that
helps them to concentrate on their
and reduce stress so that it alleviates these mental health problems.
, when a child
consecutively for few hours at school, he.she may lose concentration,
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would help him/her mind to be calm and bring back the focus. Because of these reasons, I believe
is important for kids' development.
, sculptures and drawings have valuable educational benefits for students.
, though the famous Mona-lisa masterpiece was painted in hundred years ago, still researchers are conducting their researches to study it. It proves that these arts have hidden lessons that are important for
to study and do
learning gives them the ability to improve their imagination which leads to an increase in their thinking capacity.
In summary, arts and
has played an important role in the past generation as well and present generation. I strongly agree that schools should facilitate
to spend more time studying these subjects as it has proven benefits for them.