Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

With the advancement of technologies,
children
tend to spend more time with devices. Some people think
children
should do more learnings in arts and
music
subjects at school. I strongly believe
this
is a good idea and will elucidate the reasons why they should be encouraged to follow it.
First
of all,
music
plays an indispensable role in improving the mental conditions of people. Due to the present education system, it is incontrovertible that
children
spend more time on
studies
compared to the past, so that
this
has caused mental related problems for some teens. It has proven that
music
helps them to concentrate on their
studies
and reduce stress so that it alleviates these mental health problems.
For instance
, when a child
studies
consecutively for few hours at school, he.she may lose concentration,
However
;
studies
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music
would help him/her mind to be calm and bring back the focus. Because of these reasons, I believe
music
is important for kids' development.
Furthermore
, sculptures and drawings have valuable educational benefits for students.
For example
, though the famous Mona-lisa masterpiece was painted in hundred years ago, still researchers are conducting their researches to study it. It proves that these arts have hidden lessons that are important for
children
to study and do
further
researches.
This
learning gives them the ability to improve their imagination which leads to an increase in their thinking capacity. In summary, arts and
music
has played an important role in the past generation as well and present generation. I strongly agree that schools should facilitate
children
to spend more time studying these subjects as it has proven benefits for them.

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