Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

The emergence of the internet and technology has blessed human beings in various ways. In comparison to the past, there is not much difference in the
cultures
of different countries across the globe. In
this
essay, I will discuss the factors causing
this
and explain why I believe
this
is a positive change. There are mainly two reasons behind
this
huge change in the cultural aspect.
First
of all, nowadays the wide availability of the internet has made the world confined in the palm of a man. A number of social media,
for example
, Youtube, Facebook and Twitter have been the mode of entertainment for many, who are getting highly influenced by seeing various content from other nations in these channels. Adding to
this
, an increase in
the
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international travel has
also
contributed to the change in
cultures
globally. In recent days, people are travelling abroad more than in the past and seeing a new culture in terms of clothing, eating habits and even lifestyles, which they are adopting very eagerly.
This
certainly leaves no difference in
cultures
around the world. In my opinion,
such
changes in
cultures
are definitely positive. Because with time changes are absolutely inevitable in
a
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society, as old rules and norms become outdated. By
this
wide exposure to the
cultures
of other nations through
internet
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or whatsoever, the developing countries are getting to know the new
cultures
of developed nations and following them. An article published in The Hindu posits that, in recent years, the literacy rate among
the
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30% as they are inspired to study and work like that of western countries. Indeed,
this
is a remarkable impact in a positive way. In conclusion, the modern world is a small village now having
the
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cultural influence from every corner of the globe, thanks to
the
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technological development.
Such
changes have not only inspired people to adopt modern
cultures
and grow but
also
resulted in several positive developments in terms of social norms and rules.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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