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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funds from government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

Artists
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 are a valuable component of our society.They help to keep our culture and history alive.Some
people
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 are of the opinion that they should receive monetary support from the government
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 so that they can do their work properly.In my opinion, the government should help them by giving proper funds.The following paragraphs will discuss both views and justify my opinion. Our society will be incomplete without
artists
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 and their artwork.
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, providing
artists
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 with proper funds can greatly help the economy of a
country
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 .Due to
this
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, more and more
people
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 will choose
art
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 as their profession. If a
country
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 has good
artists
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,
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 the nation can hold a
lot
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 of
art
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 exhibitions, which could help to attract several tourists,
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 boosting the tourism industry.
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, recently my hometown held an
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 exhibition, which contained paintings and sculptures of local as well as renowned
art
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 professionals.It attracted a
lot
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 of tourists from all over the
country
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 and helped the city to earn a huge amount of
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.
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, there are a
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 of issues that our society has to face today.
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, in India, several
people
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 die of hunger every day.
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, India just can't afford to spend
money
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 on funding the
artists
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.
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 of providing huge funds to
artists
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,
this
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money
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 should
instead
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 be used to resolve
such
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 issues.Even today , there are several
people
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 who do not have access to basic necessities.Government should spend
money
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 on helping
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people
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. To conclude, providing monetary help to the
artists
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 has a
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 of advantages.
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, priority should be given to improving
people
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's lives.I believe that every
country
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 should help its
artists
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 as much as possible.

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