A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although
it is sometimes thought that
animals
ought to be treated with the same
rights
that human, other
people
believe
that is
better use
animals
than human in different experiments and
research
for satisfying their needs. In my opinion, I consider that testing on
animals
ensures the safety of humans. On the one hand, some
people
think that
animals
have
rights
as well as humans. Nowadays, across the world different countries have declared that
animals
are subjects of
rights
,
this
meaning that, like humans,
animals
have
rights
that must be respected, as
right
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to freedom, that does not cause pain , satisfying their needs and preserve their habitat.
Furthermore
, all
this
is supported by the UN, EU and included many scientific, due to these statements, environmentalists and activists reaffirm their fight for
animals
rights
to stop exploitation around the world.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better for an animal to suffer than for a human to die in different experiments for food and
research
and I agree.
In addition
, there are scientific who thinks that
animals
are not really conscious,
their
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don’t
think,
don’t
have souls and
don’t
behave morally,
this
is the reason why
people
think that
animals
don’t
have
rights
and must
be use
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for
research
.
For instance
, drugs must be tested for side effects and safety reasons,
likewise
, testing medicines on
animals
ensures
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the medicine is safe for human use. In conclusion, while
people
have various opinions for
animals
rights
, I believe
animals
must be
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investigation
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for
security
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of human beings because
without
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this
research
and test, our medicine could even be dangerous for us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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