A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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it is sometimes thought that
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ought to be treated with the same
rights
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that human, other
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believe
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better use
animals
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than human in different experiments and
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for satisfying their needs. In my opinion, I consider that testing on
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ensures the safety of humans. On the one hand, some
people
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think that
animals
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have
rights
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as well as humans. Nowadays, across the world different countries have declared that
animals
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are subjects of
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,
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meaning that, like humans,
animals
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have
rights
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that must be respected, as
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to freedom, that does not cause pain , satisfying their needs and preserve their habitat.
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, all
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is supported by the UN, EU and included many scientific, due to these statements, environmentalists and activists reaffirm their fight for
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rights
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to stop exploitation around the world.
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, it is often believed that it is better for an animal to suffer than for a human to die in different experiments for food and
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and I agree.
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, there are scientific who thinks that
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are not really conscious,
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don’t
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think,
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have souls and
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behave morally,
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is the reason why
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think that
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don’t
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have
rights
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and must
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for
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.
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, drugs must be tested for side effects and safety reasons,
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, testing medicines on
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ensures
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the medicine is safe for human use. In conclusion, while
people
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have various opinions for
animals
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rights
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, I believe
animals
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must be
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for
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of human beings because
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this
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research
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and test, our medicine could even be dangerous for us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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