Some people think that it is more important to plant tree in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developing the urban designs of

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is a key factor

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promoting its residences’ quality of life. Open

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of these

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have become a controversial topic. While some people argue that these spaces should be occupied as housings, others, and I support the idea of utilizing them in planting trees as

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definitely participates in solving some environmental issues and benefits the

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’s residences.

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with, we should protect our

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and work on increasing the green

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in a

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.

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would help in mitigating several environmental problems. To illustrate

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, a recent study conducted in February 2021 by the

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preservation committee of the Gulf Cooperation Council (GCC), emphasized that planting 6

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tree in gulf states would possibly

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in solving

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effect and

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would result in decreasing the Gulf region’s average temperature about 7 to 9 degrees. As

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example shows, planting new trees is a contributory factor in solving one of the most problematic issues which

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greenhouse

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effect.

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, developing the open

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in a

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to be green has a positive impact on the

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which is more important than increasing the number of housings.

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, as more and more housing buildings construct in a

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, the living of its inhabitants become difficult. These

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new villas

and apartment buildings would likely increase the population density. Capital

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in Egypt, namely Cairo and Alexandria, have been experiences a plethora of traffic jams which make moving around these

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a nightmare.

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difficulty resulted mainly from the enormous rate of these

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population censuses.

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example makes it clear that increasing the number of accommodation buildings in

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probably has a negative outcome on their citizens’’ life.

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, dealing with open

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in a

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as potential spaces for building new dwellings is not a practical alternative. To conclude, due to the advantageous impact on

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and maintaining a good standard of living in many

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, I entirely concur with planting new trees in the open spaces of a

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rather than transforming

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areas

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to be built for housing.