You recently received a letter from a friend asking for your advice on whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why she will not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea Suggest the type of job that would be suitable.

Dear Alicia, I received your letter yesterday, and it is nice to hear from you. I am writing
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letter to give you some suggestions as you asked in your letter whether to go to a college or get a job. I would suggest you go for the latter option because I know the type of person you are, so you will get bored with theoretical assignments and projects in the college program. As I know, your passion is always to get practical knowledge, so a job will not only provide you hands-on experience
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help to add real-world experience to your resume. Nowadays, employers prefer employees with work experience
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of a well-earned degree. You have already done a diploma in mechanical engineering, so, you can apply for a mechanical technician, assistant quality technician, or other similar jobs. These jobs are best suitable for freshers at entry-level positions.
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is what I'm thinking but the final decision will be yours. If you need any assistance with making an effective resume, just let me know. Hope you will take an appropriate decision. Give regards to your family. Yours truly, Lisha Lokai.

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You addressed your friend's question directly and clearly.
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You maintained a friendly and encouraging tone throughout the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic pressures
  • financial burdens
  • tuition
  • student loans
  • uncertainty
  • work experience
  • earn money
  • practical skills
  • professional network
  • align with interests
  • growth opportunities
  • on-the-job training
  • apprenticeships
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