Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days
students
are more matured at
schools
rather than in ancients’ times. While these
school
students
encounter the problem of physical harassment that happens in many
schools
these days, these issues should be addressed by the
management
of that particular institution. In
this
essay, I will examine the possible causes and will suggest a specific resolution for
this
. To embark upon, the problems caused by bullying the
students
at the majority of
schools
can be addressed by two causatives
such
as lethargic
school
management
and psychologically affected
student
. The lack of efficient
administration
by the
school
might result in scholars misbehaviour with their peers.
That is
to say, the
school
creates the opportunity to tease the other folks inside the campus.
Besides
,some children's might be affected psychologically by the environment encountered at their homes,
that
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may lead to trouble
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friends at the institution where they study.
For example
, If the parents were quarrelling at home, that boy would be affected mentally by the hostile environment that happened in his life. So
this
kind of situation may induce him to develop a fighting spirit himself.
Hence
, these causes could be identified by examing the
student
who indulged in harassment at the institute campus. There are two possible solutions for the above reasons of teasing, one is improving the educational institution in the way of efficient
management
and the other is the specific
student
must be counselled by the educational psychologist.
That is
to say,
an
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educational
management
must be improved in aspects of both
administration
and monitoring
students
efficiently inside the circumstances.
Moreover
,the psychology
counselor
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inside the compound should take the responsibility of
couselling
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counselling
and identifying the children who
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actually
with
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misbehaving or troubling other folks.
For example
,One of my friend's
daughter
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was counselled at her
school
when she
was keep
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on teasing her peers inside the classroom.Eventually,she was found relatively good after a period of
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a month
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month
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.
Thus
,the bullying can be solved by these couple of ideas. In conclusion, Though bullying might be common in many other
schools
, due to
administration
of faculty and home disputes,
this
is likely rectified by the counselling of the
student
and the change in academy
administration
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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