Some people that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable fact that many of our

problems

are because of the imbalance in our ecosystem.

This

imbalance is mainly because

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many species of

animals

and plants got vanished and many are on the verge of getting extinct. At the same time, there are folks who think that there are other bigger environmental issues as compare to

this

aforesaid problem. In

this

essay, I will be discussing both aspects followed by my own opinion.

Firstly

, every creature be it an insect, animal, bird or human being has its place in the whole ecosystem and the presence of one is directly or indirectly dependant on the presence of another.

For instance

,

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chain at the macro level may be referred to, if trees are cut down at

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scale, the available food for herbivore

animals

will be lesser,

consequently

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, elephants will start decreasing in numbers and

further

carnivore

animals

will get badly affected.

Secondly

change in the pattern of wildlife will give birth to many environmental issues

such

as extreme weather conditions, heavy and very few rains, floods, droughts, etc. these changes will force the change in lifestyles of communities.

In addition

to the above-discussed issues, there are other

problems

also

which need immediate attention like, global warming, the explosion in human population, increase in pollution, alarming decreasing levels of drinking water, terrorism, hunting and killing

animals

for fun or for making whopping money by selling

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their skin, bones, teeth, etc. All these

problems

are because of catastrophic human activities. Because of these unthoughtful actions,

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gets disturbed resulting in many other

problems

. To sum up, it is very clear from the above discussion that all the

problems

are not independent of each other but they are directly or indirectly dependent on each other. To stop

this

, there is a need to lay down well planned and executed, stringent law system along with the heavy punishments, monetary as well non-monetary. Every person,

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should be educated enough that they

also

co-operate to save our planet.