Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

Some people argue that the most bizarre

sports

such

as sky diving and skiing need to be banned to avoid horrible accidents. I personally believe that banishing

such

risky

sports

would be a wise choice

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because nothing would be more important than our health.

To begin

with, participating in those hazardous

sports

may lead to dangerous accidents.

Moreover

, someone might even die if something goes wrong.

For instance

, One of my friends was very passionate about these adventurous

sports

and used to exploit them more often ,,

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things went very bad when sky diving , she crashed and died on the spot. One cannot put themself at high risk knowingly.

Secondly

, the equipment used for these

sports

are not up to the mark.

In addition

to

this

, the authorities in order to attract the public they are increasing the level of difficulty

such

as raising the height to more than the recommended, and with no proper ,instruments the officials are keeping everyone in danger.

For example

, Sushmitha a well-known person who is very interested in sky diving spellbind by the difficulty level and stopped her breath due to lack of technical support. To conclude, one must never encourage these wild acts. well-being comes

first

amongst all other factors. So, I reckon avoiding

such

athletics would be great.