Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

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, the foundation of success, has been triggered heated discussion over how to teach

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. Some people argue that

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should be taught at

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, while others insist that

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should receive

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in

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. In my opinion, I

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the latter one. It is reasonable for people to

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that teaching

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at

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is the most effective way of learning.

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, by gaining knowledge at their

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,

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can learn efficiently. They can save time spent on dressing up and commuting, which can be used for study or reading.

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, studying at their own pace at

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benefits

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' confidence and self-esteem.

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need to follow the teachers' teaching pace and compete with

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in

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, which is hard for some less intelligent

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to meet the teachers' requirements and be competitive among

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.

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, when they are learning at their own pace at

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,

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are more likely to be confident and satisfied because they are competitiveness-free from their

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and teachers. And

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feel depressed and unconfident.

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, families,

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as parents and grandparents, can provide more care and

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to the

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. By spending more time studying together, the relationships between families will be enhanced.

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, I agree with others that

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should go to

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to obtain more than academic performance. The group discussions among

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motivate

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' critical thinking and creativity, which cannot be gained by

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education

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. It is expressing different opinions that

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students

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to review and judge their and others' ideas carefully, which enables them to think and talk logically and even stimulate novel ideas.

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, the large group projects and numerous extra-curriculum activities can boost youngsters' social skills,

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as communication and cooperation skills. Joining a basketball team,

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, deepen their understanding of teamwork and cooperation, which is valuable in their future career.

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, by making friends and expressing their emotional issues with

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,

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can stay healthy mentally. Some

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are indeed unwilling to share private and emotional feelings with their families. If they cannot share these issues with

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, they would suffer from mental problems,

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as depression. In conclusion,

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many people believe

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has some advantages, it is not the best way of teaching. To make

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a well-rounded person

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a valuable member of society, I

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that they should be taught in

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.