At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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population nowadays has significantly been increased

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reason, the number of youth has surprisingly surpassed the number of elderly people in some countries. While it is argued that there will be more challenges for the nation, I

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believe that various benefits will be made and will strengthen

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. Analysing the demographical bonus that would massively be received and the generation of

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that could help the learning process will prove

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, the rapid growth of young people of the nation could lead to the demographical bonus will state have for their future.

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generation of productive age.

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, they could force the state to be more productive so

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economic growth

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will be improved vastly.

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might drive the country to be more competitive to participate in the global economic competition.

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is,

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, why the fast growth of the youth will be more beneficial for the nation.

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, the generation of

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these days might undeniably be helpful for shaping better communities.

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, as now there are diverse online platforms for education, the youth can easily access various materials to learn and strengthen their knowledge.

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, many institutions nowadays have contributed in terms of giving open-access

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as data, articles, and courses)

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worldwide. It is true that the government should manage various

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, but evidently, private sectors could support them conjointly.

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makes it clear that the internet could be useful to actualize the demographical bonus of the state. In summary, the global computer network could undeniably encourage the actualization of better young generations.

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, the excess of junior communities might give some advantages for some countries globally. After a thorough analysis

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recommended for the government to initiate some structured

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to program these conditions strategically.