In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the midst of

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technology-driven global world, In most

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the countries number of

crime

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crimes

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is rising

day-by-day

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. In my opinion

main

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causes

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of it

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people want to have more money for having a

luxury

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life. In

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essay

i

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will explain my

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view points

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about

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, Why

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happening and how can we solve it.

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,

i

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will say, why

offence

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offences

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are

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increasing? We all are living in a

competative

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competitive

world, so those who

dont

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don't

have a proper job are the main culprits. Apparently, in

this

century technology have influenced our children as well as

the

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adults. Admittedly, there are more paid online

games

going on , so more than 25% of our kids are addicted to

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and all are related to violence. At

first

, they use their pocket money to play those

games

once their money

get

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finished they will start to steal from home

then

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from others. Regarding youngsters, they are

influesnced

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influenced

by drugs.

Normaly

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, youth are active all the time ,

however

, if they use

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the drug

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drug

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they get an adrenalin rush so they will be more active and they

wont

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know what they are doing,

hence

,for getting the kick they are ready to do any

crime

such

as , rash drive, misbehave with others even ready to do murder. I know a boy from my village , who was 20

year

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old he was a single child for his parents. he was addicted to alcohol and drugs, because of his pressure his father gifted him a new model bike and he made

party

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for his friends

for

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this

reason, after the

party

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he

drive

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the bike and met with

accident

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, he lost his life

aswell

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as well

as he killed two more

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.

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is just an example, like

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this

the

thousands of

crime

is happening daily.

Secondly

,

i

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will explain , how we can solve

this

issue?

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of

all

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every

children

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get

proper

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education. Education should be

compulsary

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compulsory

and free of cost.

As a

result

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we can reduce

unembloyment

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unemployment

and reduce

crime

.

Next

, control on paid online

games

especially

the

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violent game. keep an age limit for those

games

.

Apparently

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limit the supply of drugs and alcohol or simply ban it. From

school

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level ,kids should learn the law, what are the punishments of crimes and all, so they will be afraid to do so , or else they will rethink before they attempt any crimes. To put it in a nutshell, I

pendown

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pen down

saying that, criminal offence are increasing day

today

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life,

however

proper education and

employments

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employment

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can reduce

this

number of offence. Every citizen should think , all others are your brothers and sisters, so you

wont

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be doing any

crime

against anyone.