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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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In
this
 day and age, in some
countries
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 the
population
 of young
people
 is more as compared to that of old
people
. In my point of view, the benefit of
this
 scenario definitely outweighs the drawback of it.
To begin
, if the
population
 of young
people
 is larger,
then
 it will help the
country
 to develop technologically and economically, the young generation favours the technological development easily as compared to the old generation which will make a
country
 developed in terms of technology.
Moreover
, the younger
people
 are more energetic and enthusiastic towards their work, they will perform their duties in a disciplined manner and try to achieve their goals hurriedly resulting
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 economically developed nation.
For example
, a social media app Tik-Tok is famous among the youngsters, the same is not favoured by the older
people
,
also
 in the
country
 like China the
population
 of senior
people
 is 80 per cent of the total
population
,
thus
this
country
 has to depend on the workforce of other countries.
On the other hand
, if the
population
 of the youngsters who are not educated is more,
then
 the government will have to bear the burden.
For instance
, a similar situation is prevailing in a
country
 like India, where the number of uneducated youth is more,
as a result
, they cannot contribute to the growth of the economy and the government has to bear the burden of these
people
,
also
 the disadvantage of more younger
people
 will result in loss of tradition and culture if the values and traditions are not imparted in young individuals. To conclude, though the values and traditions of different cultures are significant,
but
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at the same time is the development of a
country
, taking into consideration the above-mentioned points it can be rightly said that the advantages of more youngsters outweigh the disadvantage of the same.
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