Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There has been a debate on whether entertainment or educational values should be the goal that filmmakers opt for their
movies
. From my perspective, I would argue that educational benefits need to be incorporated into movie
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although
it is thought by some that
films
should only
for
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amusement. Admittedly, those who argue that entertaining
movies
have some key points in favour. It can not be denied that people nowadays are getting more and more hectic and so they are usually under an enormous amount of stress.
That is
the reason why seeing recreational
movies
are one of the best ways to release
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stress, feel relaxed and be mortally healthier.
Moreover
, there are numerous genres of
movies
such
as comedy, which make viewers laugh much and think about their works less.
Hence
, it is becoming increasingly popular for
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to choose
films
as a kind of entertainment.
On the other hand
, I believe that educational values play an important role in providing
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for viewers.
First
and foremost, watchers tend to learn and imitate the actor's lifestyle and way of thinking. It means that
films
have profound effects
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because they are capable of acting in the same way or wear the same clothes as movie actors.
Last
but not least,
movies
can be learning resources for watchers. To illustrate, they can learn some new vocabularies or knowledge thanks to
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movies
. In summary, it is understandable why numerous individuals think
films
are
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of entertainment.
However
, I am inclined to believe that
movies
can not be perfect without educational values.
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