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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.dicuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people you decided to do this

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It is often argued by, many nations that
yongsters
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youngsters
 are encouraged to
work
 or travel for a
year
 after finishing high school and before enrolled
to
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the
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university education.
This
 essay will examine the
advantsges
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advantages
 and disadvantages and provide a logical conclusion. On the
one
 hand, there are few advantages of
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 a
year
 gap between finishing high school and starting university are,
first
,
one
 can get a chance to
work
 and earn some money and experience in the field.
secondly
,
one
 can go to visit some places and enjoy.
Moreover
, someone get
one
year
 off to prepare
themselve
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themselves
 for
entrance
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the entrance
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 exam, if he can get more score in that exam he might
be get
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chance
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 to
enroll
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 in the best college
of
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 the city or country.
Also
,
work
 in between the
study
 will
beneficial
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 in the future education but just for travelling loose
one
year
 of
curriculum
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 it is not a good idea.
On the other hand
,
one
year
 in between the
study
it
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is not a good thing because
,
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 there are many people who
fully
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 qualified but still
strugle
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struggle
 to get a good job and in between the
study
 we can not have enough knowledge to do a job.
Consequently
,
first
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 we should complete the education after we can find
job
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 easily with handsome
sallery
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salary
 package. Before starting college go to travel for enjoyment it is not good, we should start
study
 for
next
 stage of the
study
. In conclusion, travelling and doing
work
are
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 the best thinking of the youngsters but before starting the college students should
required
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require
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 to get some knowledge about the course. They should not waste their
one
year
, it is not only a
year
 but their success, they will be late towards success.
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