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Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sport. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is always controversial to decide the way of using public
money
, as it is what was collected from the whole
citizens
. I wholeheartedly agree with the statement that governments ought to invest more
money
on
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education
 than recreation and sport. There are two reasons I believe
this
 way which I will explore in the following essay.
First
, it increases the happiness of
citizens
, because it broadens their opportunities to be successful and horizons. On one hand, the possibility of becoming a successful sports player that can afford daily expenses just by playing sports is utterly low.
On the other hand
, it is much easier for those who have studied well to succeed financially.
This
 is because the latter one has more opportunities in society.
Thus
, people need not be extremely careful about financial problems.
Moreover
,
citizens
 can discover their hobbies by learning as well. Of course, it is clear that many people enjoy playing sports in their spare time, there are
also
 people who find learning new things completely enjoyable. Take my cousin as an example. He was playing football during his whole school life, but he always knew that it would never be one of his hobbies since he never found it fun to play. Four years ago, when he broke his leg, he stayed in a hospital and started learning German and French, whose books were donated for patients by his local government, to kill his time there.
Consequently
, he became fascinated
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 learning foreign languages and determined himself to be a linguist in the future.
Second
, the option is
also
 beneficial for the nations and cities as well.
Education
 has always been the top priority when it comes to building a better future. According to a Harvard study, 85% of students who have acquired a good quality of
education
 likely to wish playing an indispensable role in changing society to make it better. Reading books provides humans to be thoughtful and learning history allows mankind to learn from failures.
Furthermore
, it enables governments to obtain more
money
, as
citizens
 earn more if they have evaluated knowledge. For these reasons, I believe that
education
 should be regarded as the most essential use of government
money
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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