In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
Nowadays, in several countries, most of the population are interested to know about the history of their accommodations. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reason for this
growing trend and expresses my opinion on the matter. Firstly
, I will give a reason for why people interested
to know about their lodging, and Add a missing verb
are interested
secondly
, I will explore the way of researching for this
view.
On one
hand, many of menkind like to understand the mystery of the place that they live or will live there. One
reason for that could be to humans have an interest in everything and like to explore, and it comes from the beginning. furthermore
, people want to no is there any bad situation that could be put them in danger or harassment. For example
, one
of my friends bought a house 2 months ago before purchasing he didn't ask anybody about the building but now he is really regret
because his neighbours are really nosy. Change the verb form
really regrets
Moreover
, we have to research everything before buying it and in this
case, the thing is home, and we will pay a huge amount of money, moving on, our family will live there also
, our children will group and goes to school there. That's why populations becoming interested in finding out the history of the house they live in or will live in.
On the other hand
, one
of the ways we can find information about lodging we want to buy or rent is the internet, and this
is one
of the most popular methods, for example
, we can read the reviews of the building. Also
, we can ask to
the manager of the building because the manager should know everything about where he/she managing.
In conclusion, Remove the preposition
apply
this
is good to know the history of the place that you and your family will live there and with this
view, you can find the proper accommodation in your taste, and I agree with it.Submitted by mhdshmnsr on
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