Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that governments should take
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charge of scientific
research
instead
of private corporations. I would disagree with
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relevant examples. On the one hand, governments can not fully concentrate on scientific
research
as the fact that they have so many things to worry about and take care of
such
as education and healthcare. What I mean is that
this
may lead to the delay of upcoming discoveries, which results in the slow growth and development of the country.
Therefore
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investigation should be managed by companies as they can invest more effectively with specialized knowledge and professional technology. Many corporations make
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from
this
field, so of
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they would be more
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good
research
results.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks of letting the companies carried out scientific
research
.
That is
to say, many of them are
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and they just think about how to earn as much money as they can.
For example
, many people who are suffering from
disease
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can not afford to buy drugs as their
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are raised alarmingly. What’s more, some organizations
also
do illegal
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nuclear weapons, which would threaten
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the peace of the world.
Thus
, it is the responsibility of the government to manage
this
kind of situation. To sum up, I would restate that
although
private companies should be allowed to do scientific
research
as it may help to progress the country, the
research
must be supervised by the governments in order to provide high-quality and reliable results.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific research
  • government oversight
  • ethical guidelines
  • public interest
  • public funding
  • transparency
  • widespread access
  • long-term societal benefits
  • profit motive
  • biased findings
  • restricted research
  • collaboration
  • bureaucratic delays
  • political influence
  • innovation
  • regulations
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