Some countries owning home rather than renting. Do you think this is Negative or Positive
Poverty countryside, who going out of their own province to work at other province or countries.
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nowadays
such
a very valuable inventory for human life around the world. Some family
believe that purchasing a habitat is better than renting. While the others don't. These Fix the agreement mistake
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Undoubtedly, people
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First
, they are wealthy people
or families. So they have sufficient money to effort house to stay. Even though how expensive they are. Next
, some of the crowd or families think that they need to stay in this
place or province for a lifetime,
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similarly
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they decided to buy them , and the last
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example is home is the warmest place for family members as well as an assembly spot.
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Nevertheless
, some people
prefer to renting than buying. As a result
of two reasons. Firstly
, they are labourers with low-income.Thus
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they will think that it is not necessary for them to buy it. From my ,perspective I also
prefer buying than renting a house with the factors that I mentioned above.
In conclusion, Some people
will think buying home
is better than renting. While the others don't. According to Correct article usage
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