some people say that spending time to develop a successful career is the most important thing. Others say that spending time with friends and family is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that spending

time

proper way is the most important thing in any human

life

. There are those who say that

time

should

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to build a

career

.

However

, others believe that it's important to spend

time

with friends and family. In

this

,

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I will examine

the

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both sides of the

arguments

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and provide my overall opinion to support my

arguments

. Generally ,speaking there are mainly two reasons why

people

believe that we should spend

time

to build my

career

. Perhaps the main reason why

people

are in favour of

this

idea

is

because

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develop a successful

career

is the

first

priority and all other relationships are secondary.

That is

the reason we should spend

time

as much as possible to develop a

career

. If anyone can develop a

career

, the rest of the

the

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people

will come in

life

without any effort. A

further

point in favour of

this

idea

is that, without

,

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a,career

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career

people

have to be always dependent on others.

For instance

, if any

people

spend their

time

building relationships instated of build careers, they can not do anything in their

life

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without

that

thought

other's help. Despite, the

arguments

there is cause for the

idea

that spending

time

with spend and family is important. Perhaps the main reason why

people

think

that is

a good

idea

is

because

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relationship with friends and family is the main basis for mental peace. if any

people

have a good

career

but a not good relationship with friends and family, there is no value for their

life

. Bad relationships turn into

a personal problems

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personal problems

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such

as loneliness, alcoholism and

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alignment

. in conclusion,

this

is a topic which is very relevant to modern society.despite

arguments

to the contrary. I feel very strongly that, spending

time

for developing a

career

is important. if have only a good relationship without

career

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a career

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,

life

will be always dependent on others.