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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In later years, there will not have anybody buying newspapers and books due to there will be news and knowledge which will be able to read on social media. It is apparent that nowadays technologies are developed substantially.
Moreover
,
people
 do not even read any papers because everything is presented on their mobiles. Personally, I agree with
this
 statement and supporting reasons will be examined.
To begin
 with, it is noticeable that there are almost everything that can be searched on Google or other websites, which are free and easier than buying books for reading.
People
 are up to date by knowing social news from a mobile which is a necessary item for everyone.
Furthermore
, they do not need to pay any money except the
internet
 fees. It is undeniable that they will choose the easier way which is suitable and comfortable for them.
In addition
, when newspapers or books are done of reading, as the result, they will
finally
 turn to garbages. It seems to be a waste of paper that can affect global warming indirectly. When
people
 have finished their readings,
people
 would throw them away, it is only a minor group that will keep them but most
people
 do not.
On the contrary
, it is more convenient from using a mobile, there are updated news and some special situations which are reported on the
internet
. After they are done with surfing the
internet
, they do not need to throw it away, just leave the website and continue to others. In conclusion, nowadays
people
 are surrounded by social media that offer them freely to search for something on the
internet
. I believe that in the future, there will be less of buying newspapers and
finally
 disappear.
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  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
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  • access to
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  • internet
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