Many people migrate from rural to urban areas. What are the benefits and limitations.

Nowadays, many people migrate from rural to urban
areas
for taking the benefits of urban amenities and
better
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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.
However
,
this
trend can affect
both
the adaptation of
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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and high living
cost
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costs
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.
This
essay will discuss
both
pros and cons that are associated with
this
trend.
To begin
with, the
first
principal reason for relocating rural to urban
areas
is ample
of
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employment opportunities. As the cities are the centre of trade and commerce which provide
diffferent
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different
placement opportunities for
both
the fresher as well as experienced persons.
Furthermore
, urban facilities
such
as emergencies health care units are
the
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boon for
large
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a large
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number of persons.
For instance
, recently my uncle fell down from stairs and he was unable to stand up properly
then
we brought very quickly to
hospital
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the hospital
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. Due to the 24 hours hospital
facility
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he
treated
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was treated
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well by doctors.
Hence
,
the
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migration does bring benefits to the people
on
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to
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large
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extent.
On the other hand
, despite the upsides of
this
trajectory, the drawback cannot be undermined.
Firstly
, the living cost of urban
areas
are
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exorbitant.
For
example
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the house rent of cities
such
as Delhi and Mumbai are
sky rocketing
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and can burn a hole in the pocket of
middle class
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society.
Secondly
,
due to
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the rapidly shifting to urban
areas
results in increased population and pollution.
Moreover
, due to the high
population
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there are many other problems associated
such
as shortage of shelter and traffic-jam. So, move from
villages
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village
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to town
also
carry many limitations to society. To conclude, It
is believe
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that
this
trend of migration is
debatable
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topic. it
give
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both
boon and bane to
the
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society. Many people are
opposing
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to
this
. I regard
this
as a
possitive
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positive
sign.
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