Many people believe that increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the one causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the utilization of cars on large scale plays
vital
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role to pollute
cities
.While, other
thinks
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that, the
industries
emit more harmful
gases
into the
enviornment
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environment
.
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will intend to analyse both sides along with my
prespective
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perspective
. To commence with, increasing the uses of cars and other
moter
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motor
-vehicles polluting the
cities
continously
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continuously
such
as inclining temperature rates and increasing level of harmful
gases
in
atmosphere
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.
In other words
,vehicles
emits
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harmful
gases
that affecting living beings.
For instance
, respiratory diseases,lung cancers are very common in polluted
cities
nowadays as well as, it leads to
increase
temperature
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of
cities
.
As a result
, health issues are becoming very widespread in
this
era.
On the other hand
,
industries
plays
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significant
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role to
increase
pollution
levels. To elaborate it, most of the
industries
are running
continously
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continuously
so the emission of
gases
are
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also
on large scale in
cities
.
Also
, factories emit hazardous
gases
that
increase
the
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greenhouse
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green house
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gases
,
noice
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noise
pollution
and many other problems in
cities
.
Moreover
, there are some toxic chemicals stored in
industries
that may
increase
the risk of disasters.
For example
, in 1984 India had faced
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gas disaster in Bhopal city that
increase
the level of
pollution
as well as radiation in
atmosphere
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,millions of people were died and affected by radiation
that
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caused by the gas tragedy.
Thus
,
industries
can
also
pollute
atmosphere
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in
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great
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scale. In conclusion,
pollution
is the major problem nowadays that causes many issues in
cities
area
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like temperature rise by cars and
industries
but according to my opinion,
industries
has more catastrophic effects on the
cities
such
as
industries
emits
pollution
and some
nuclear powered
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industries
also
produce radiation in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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