Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays our society is becoming concerned about the issue of protecting

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living in captivity. Owning to the problems which

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situation causes to the environment, some people advocate that keeping

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in

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is unacceptable as they are instantly constrained and may be treated violently while being there.

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, others are ardent adherents of the idea that

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organisations as

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were created and incorporated into our life as a means of helping unique

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of

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to survive and not go extinct. From my point of view, beasts cannot be kept in cages by humans and

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, should be prohibited by the law.

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with,

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kept in

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are believed to be extracted from their natural habitats, so it is a priori harmful to them. To exemplify, there are numerous researches that provide us with credible findings, according to which any kind of animal

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supposed to live in a wild environment suffers from living in a cage experiencing a lack of freedom and movement. To

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elaborate, it can cause numerous diseases ( i.e. obesity) for these beasts as the result of a lack of natural habitat. What is more, there are various

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that are classified as vulturous or,

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, predators which means that their being fed damages their inborn hunting skills ruining natural diversity.

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, the public claims that

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should be considered as a way of making it possible for endangered

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to survive. They assume that wild

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are treated there like human beings surrounded by good nutrition and health care so there is no point in being agitated about their living conditions.

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, it is widely accepted that some

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are undergoing a special therapy in

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through which their fertility is rising and their continue to exist on the planet with new healthy offsprings.

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, I believe that the benefits of

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should be viewed only as decorations behind which there is a real dirty business to find.

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, it is not a secret that

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are being sustained due to the amount of money raised from ticket selling.

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,

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are aimed at increasing their own popularity just to get more money.

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means that

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can be treated regardless of their bodily requirements and other important for their health conditions. A great example of

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statement is the fact that some

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let people rent their rare

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for photosets and other kinds of people´s entertainment paying no attention that

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can suffer from it.

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, there are some

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,

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, pandas which require strict environmental conditions for their pairing and having offspring and these can be achieved only in natural habitats. Notwithstanding, there are lots of

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all over the globe keeping pandas in captivity regardless of their possible extinction there. To sum up, the issue of keeping beasts in

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is very controversial as there are numerous pros and cons advocating and undermining the significance of

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organisations. Despite

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I do believe that the captivation of

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is inadmissible as there are endless examples of people using wild

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just to benefit from it

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of caring.