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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
Today, opportunities that
people
 have, offer better living conditions than they used to have. It is commonly believed that because of
this
 improvement
choices
 are limitless and have a lot to offer to the owners
of
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them
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.
This
 essay will discuss why nowadays there are so many variants for choosing for certain groups. Governments always try to develop the standard of living by applying different laws,
however
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 they can not succeed completely.
This
 means that, if the state has difficulty
to handle
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 the drawbacks, the population may not take advantage of all of the opportunities given to them.
In addition
 to
this
, suffering from poverty and low quality of life cause decreasing
choices
 for a living.
For example
, there are women who have not even an opportunity to speak for themselves, put aside
choices
. So that, the more advanced authorities there are, the more chances
people
 get from life. From a different point of view, in some developed nations, it is more common to have different possibilities ahead of a person.
This
 is it because, now without world wars,
plauges
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plagues
 and other issues that older
people
 had experienced in their youth,
people
 have less thing to worry about. More importantly, if many
choices
 became a reality for the rest of the world, they would find their path too. Indeed, living a life in today’s world turns into a game that only the lucky ones can win. Because of the opportunities given to
people
, for being in right time and place make them favourable. To conclude , some
people
 advocate the belief that many
choices
increasingly
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 become common among certain
people
. I entirely agree that new generations have a lot of advantages and choose the right one easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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