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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#world #internet #people #product #reviews #products #services #development
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this
 advanced era,
internet
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 has overruled the Lives of individuals. General masses opine to comment on
product
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products
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 as well as services they already have gone through. I personally
affirms
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 that its pros outweigh the cons.
This
eassy
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essay
easy
 will bolster its merits and demerits in upcoming paragraphs
..
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 To set the wheels in
motions
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,
plethora
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a plethora
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 of good points comes up in favour of the above view. Very
first
 is time and money retaining. As far as,
i
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 am concerned reviews posted could provide
the
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apply
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information related to
particular
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a particular
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 commodity,
finally
 saving money and time both as a
resultant
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.
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person
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a person
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 spending money on a new item can judge it before through reviews highlighted on
website
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the website
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.
In addition
 to
this
, rather products as per customer's preferences
for instance
 -amazon a giant online shopping app,
pin -points
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pinpoints
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 its high-rated commodities. Apart from
this
 from the enterprise view, these play
prominent
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 role in adding up sales which ultimately boosts income plus profits. Despite -off its enumerated advantages, not much but some disadvantages hits the ground. Reviews, many a times are not
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trustworthy
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trust worthy
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trustworthy
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, could be misleading. Unlike random
survey
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surveys
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. Companies hire people to put on favourable posts. People are paid for the comments and high
rating
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ratings
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. These ways are proliferating
now-a- days
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inspite
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in spite
 of giving
true
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a true
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 picture of production. All
this
 is done to lure more customers. All in all, to sum
up
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 the modern method of rating and reviewing gives fruitful feedback until and useless the method is used in
genuine
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a genuine
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 and proper way
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