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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbors as they did in the past. Why is this so and what can be done to improve contact between neighbors?

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At present, most of us do not have a close connection with our
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 due to various
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. In
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 essay, I will discuss the main
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 for
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 phenomenon and I will make some practical suggestions to overcome
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 situation.
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 with, many families had very close relationships with their neighbouring families in the good old days. But gradually it seems those connections had been fading away along with the time. In my opinion, the main
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 are hectic work schedules without much relaxing time and the improvement of technology over the
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 few decades. Today, both elders and youngsters, we all sunk in various duties and tasks, without much free time for others. Elders are often very busy with their jobs while youngsters are extremely busy with their studies starting from very young ages like age 5. The endless competitive nature of society is one of the root causes of
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 phenomenon.
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, with the development of technology, by nature
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 seldom talk to
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face
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, because they can easily use various technologies to communicate with others irrespective of where they are physically living starting from your neighbour to your friend in another country. To come out from the previously mentioned circumstances, we should try to engage and talk to our neighbour's
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 as much as we can. Apart from that, we can share certain things on regular basis,
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 as specially made food.
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, we can arrange regular meet-ups and invite our neighbours on special occasions, for ,example birthdays or anniversaries. To sum up, nowadays, we can clearly observe a distance between our neighbouring
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, rather than it used to be in the past due to aforementioned very
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. But if we can understand
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 situation and act vigilantly, we can still bridge
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 gap between our neighbours and have improved close contacts to build up a better society.
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