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Young drivers are careless and overconfident, and too many are killed in accidents. To eliminate this problem, we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#drivers #accidents #children #skills #school
Because of overconfidence and careless driving, a lot of young drivers die in car accidents, so according to some, teaching skills of how to drive safely to
school
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children
 could properly address
this
 concern. I completely disagree that adopting
this
 approach would reduce the number of young drivers being killed in accidents. A good reason why being at
school
 ages,
children
 should not be taught about skills of safe driving is their strict timetable.
In other words
, a lot of basic
school
 subjects,
such
 as
the
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mathematics and
the
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literature are included in a
school
corriculum
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curriculum
, and
children
 should spend enough
time
 to learn them effectively.
Consequently
, any irrelevant subjects
such
 as how to have
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safe driving could be a distraction for
children
’s main focus and,
thus
, affect their educational performance. Another point to consider is that there is a
time
 gap between when
children
 go to
school
 and the
time
 they get their driving license.
This
 gap would be different for various
children
, from graduating to being trained for driving. Over
this
time
 period, they could forget whatever they learnt about a safe drive, and all those lessons should be repeated again for them.
For instance
,
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young
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 might postpone getting their driving certificate until when they
enroll
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 at a university.
Finally
, a
school
 child’s mind is not prepared to receive some types of information like lessons on safe driving. To perceive their environment and acquire more advanced knowledge,
children
firstly
 should be educated about most basic subjects at their schools. It means that in order to understand driving safely,
children
’s minds are required to learn about concepts like
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safety and its definition in their lives beforehand. In conclusion, to deal with the problem of careless young drivers who get themselves being killed in accidents, due to several certain reasons, other solutions rather than teaching
school
children
 should be considered.
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